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Music on Summer Days

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Sitting on the park bench
Just waiting, waiting
For something, someone.

With earphones on,
Time passes by slowly-
                Much too slowly
As you can hear your thoughts.
     (this sweet, melancholy music.)

Your playlist knows this (trust me.)
Music plays -just over and over-
In your head
         Your soul.

Songs about
Friendship and fun.

And now you know
These summer days
Are still early, very early.

Love and kisses and gifts
Late nights spent
Talking to that someone.

These days, wonderful
Beautiful summer days-
We hope to never end.

Oh, but all days must
End.

And your playlist, (set at random)
It knows this.

And it plays,
How strangely, strangely it plays

That last song of heartbreak.

But that's just a song.

Too bad love doesn't have
Earphones that you can /just/
                      -oh, how simple would it be?-

Take off.
I'm just trying out a new style, and this topic came to me at random. I think it's alright, not my best work, but it's alright.

The format's kind of weird, I know.

Comments and critiques are appreciated!
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I was a bit worried about the format of this, because I wanted to try something new. Is the format alright? And even if it's not, was the idea of 'music to life' portrayed well in this piece?
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Fireside-Troop46231's avatar
all i know is that you have nothing to be ashamed of, it's very well written. I think my engilsh teacher would be impressed (and not everyone's playlist lled with songs of friendship)